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You are finally here
Where should I begin
What could I possibly say
If you listen closely you can hear it all
The wind is telling my life story
The only witness for my existence
I will soon fade and be nothing more than a distant memory

Hold me in your arms
Keep me warm
Let the beating of your heart strengthen mine
So I can hold on a little longer
Maybe you would feel me for the first and last time

Love sparkles in your eyes
But I taste betrayal in your tears
Lie to me more
Tell me you love me
Crown me as your queen
Promise you will never let go

I flip through the years of pain
Page after page
Lie after lie
All end today

I've always wished you would hold me in your arms
Ironically that's where I'll die
I know you don't love me
So I'll go along pretending

It's finally come to an end
A cold body in the arms of someone who never cared
A murdered moan
A silent scream that will never be herd
Fading into oblivion
©2005-2009 ~just-an0ther-d0t
:iconjust-an0ther-d0t:

Author's Comments

it's just something i found myself writing.
i'm really not a great poet but i'm trying.

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:icondeath-moose:
what are you talking about, "not much of a poet" ? you rock! :+fav:

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:floating: The eyes, they see! *hides*
:iconimaginative-dreamer:
i like it! it tells of someone loving a person and the other person doesn't love the first person back. That happens alot.

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:rose:know that you can always produce work that is better than your best work. there is always room for improvement nothing is ever perfect.:rose:
:iconjust-an0ther-d0t:
thx, more than you expect too
:iconaprilsloveaffair:
brilliant

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peace
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:iconhoanghai1128:
a bit unknown, but sad spirit come thought your story ...
is that your real story ?

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My small gallery : [link]
My group website : [link]
It's a small business website, a little fun for my life ...
:iconjust-an0ther-d0t:
thank you for the:+fav:
tho i don't think i have a story:)
:iconkehmar:
Amazing. I really like it. One more reason to love poetry :)
:iconjust-an0ther-d0t:
oh, thx:blush:
i loved yours too

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