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In Yor Arms by ~just-an0ther-d0t:iconjust-an0ther-d0t:



You are finally here
Where should I begin
What could I possibly say
If you listen closely you can hear it all
The wind is telling my life story
The only witness for my existence
I will soon fade and be nothing more than a distant memory

Hold me in your arms
Keep me warm
Let the beating of your heart strengthen mine
So I can hold on a little longer
Maybe you would feel me for the first and last time

Love sparkles in your eyes
But I taste betrayal in your tears
Lie to me more
Tell me you love me
Crown me as your queen
Promise you will never let go

I flip through the years of pain
Page after page
Lie after lie
All end today

I've always wished you would hold me in your arms
Ironically that's where I'll die
I know you don't love me
So I'll go along pretending

It's finally come to an end
A cold body in the arms of someone who never cared
A murdered moan
A silent scream that will never be herd
Fading into oblivion
©2005-2008 ~just-an0ther-d0t
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it's just something i found myself writing.
i'm really not a great poet but i'm trying.

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~Death-Moose:iconDeath-Moose: Sep 23, 2005, 4:10:02 PM
what are you talking about, "not much of a poet" ? you rock! :+fav:

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~imaginative-dreamer:iconimaginative-dreamer: Sep 23, 2005, 4:39:29 PM
i like it! it tells of someone loving a person and the other person doesn't love the first person back. That happens alot.

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~just-an0ther-d0t:iconjust-an0ther-d0t: Sep 23, 2005, 4:41:24 PM
thx, more than you expect too
~aprilsloveaffair:iconaprilsloveaffair: Sep 23, 2005, 7:58:50 PM
brilliant

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~hoanghai1128:iconhoanghai1128: Oct 1, 2005, 1:03:07 AM
a bit unknown, but sad spirit come thought your story ...
is that your real story ?

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~just-an0ther-d0t:iconjust-an0ther-d0t: Oct 1, 2005, 7:02:39 AM
thank you for the:+fav:
tho i don't think i have a story:)
~Kehmar:iconKehmar: Oct 1, 2005, 1:22:48 PM
Amazing. I really like it. One more reason to love poetry :)
~just-an0ther-d0t:iconjust-an0ther-d0t: Oct 1, 2005, 1:30:43 PM
oh, thx:blush:
i loved yours too